This piece is simply amazing, words don't do it justice. The wide view of the Earth behind is just a glittering mass of green, blue, and white. But something so small and so simple, like this perfectly shaped droplet of water resting on a dandelion, can capture its whole view in such detail. This is the perfect piece to show how something so delicate and fragile can have such a big impact on the bigger picture of things. I also enjoy your other works, and I encourage you to keep on going with these! You're a very talented artist. It would be a waste to not go on with this series of photos. I can't get enough of the shining water orb, the whorls of cloud captured inside, the beautiful details on such a small, seemingly insignificant object. You have done a marvelous job with this, and I look forward to seeing more.
I'm an occasional critique giver with and help out where I can. Having a love of ultra macro photos I just had to be the one to critique yours!
As always with your dandelion droplets this work has great vision. I know that setting up a shot like this takes far more than anyone would guess if they have not tried it. You've thought through what you wanted very thoroughly and then executed it to perfection.
For originality I've given you 4.5s only because dandelion seed droplets have been done before - but mostly by you I have to admit!
Technique and Impact both are 5 s You are the master of these kinds of shots and this one is no exception.
I love the blue/green/bokeh background and it truly does make the droplet appear like the Earth. Your focus and depth of field, as always, are perfect.
As to suggestions, I'm wondering how the shot would look if you'd included the full width of the seed's tendrils with perhaps a tiny bit of space either side or them, or if the seed stem had been on a 'Rule of Thirds' line, or even on a slight angle - would these things have given a more artistic feel? However, the droplet is the focus, and zooming out from that would reduce its impact. Perhaps they are just suggestions to try for future shots?
This is a beautifully interesting shot and I find myself really drawn to investigating every shape and colour in the droplet. Also, the apparent shine around the outer edge, suggesting almost a pure ice quality to the droplet is very beautiful.
I think you also deserve extra points for sharing your methods so openly and providing such a thorough tutorial for everyone. Bravo!
your photography never ceases to amaze me... they're gorgeous! I can't help but ask what kind of camera you use? I'm pretty sure you're using a macro lens but your photo quality is really good... c:
As always with your dandelion droplets this work has great vision. I know that setting up a shot like this takes far more than anyone would guess if they have not tried it. You've thought through what you wanted very thoroughly and then executed it to perfection.
For originality I've given you 4.5
Technique and Impact both are 5
I love the blue/green/bokeh background and it truly does make the droplet appear like the Earth. Your focus and depth of field, as always, are perfect.
As to suggestions, I'm wondering how the shot would look if you'd included the full width of the seed's tendrils with perhaps a tiny bit of space either side or them, or if the seed stem had been on a 'Rule of Thirds' line, or even on a slight angle - would these things have given a more artistic feel? However, the droplet is the focus, and zooming out from that would reduce its impact. Perhaps they are just suggestions to try for future shots?
This is a beautifully interesting shot and I find myself really drawn to investigating every shape and colour in the droplet. Also, the apparent shine around the outer edge, suggesting almost a pure ice quality to the droplet is very beautiful.
I think you also deserve extra points for sharing your methods so openly and providing such a thorough tutorial for everyone. Bravo!
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