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This is a wonderful macro photo. Allow me to elucidate why. The water droplets have been caught by this flower(leaves perhaps?) and it seems as though these are trees laden with fruits. Water droplets are something you can hardly go wrong in photography because of their innate beauty and purity. They seem fragile and add such a ethereal mood to a photo. The light in the flower contrasts well with the black background. Although, a bit of the left side of the photo could be cropped since it does not add anything to the photo. Overall, good job.
I really like this macro photo of water droplets on dandelion seeds! I like the clarity of focus on the water droplets - they look so three-dimensional like they could float out of the screen! It contrasts nicely with the dandelion seeds, so soft and fragile. However, something about the composition doesn't feel right to me... I think it could benefit from more movement in the frame. The shape formed by the dandelion is predominantly vertical and horizontal. Perhaps it would form a more interesting composition at an angle? Or something in the background might help, to bring in diagonals, movement, and more depth. Overall it is a lovely and eye-catching image. Well done!
This is a wonderful macro photo. Allow me to elucidate why. The water droplets have been caught by this flower(leaves perhaps?) and it seems as though these are trees laden with fruits. Water droplets are something you can hardly go wrong in photography because of their innate beauty and purity. They seem fragile and add such a ethereal mood to a photo. The light in the flower contrasts well with the black background. Although, a bit of the left side of the photo could be cropped since it does not add anything to the photo.
Overall, good job.
However, something about the composition doesn't feel right to me... I think it could benefit from more movement in the frame. The shape formed by the dandelion is predominantly vertical and horizontal. Perhaps it would form a more interesting composition at an angle? Or something in the background might help, to bring in diagonals, movement, and more depth.
Overall it is a lovely and eye-catching image. Well done!
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